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满江红*金山亭

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发表于 2010-12-3 19:31:32 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p>              <strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5">满江红*金山亭 </font></strong></p>
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<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5"><strong>  安步金山,叹胜境,惊眉称绝. <br/>  看琼阁,苍松槎错,画梁层叠. <br/>  射角楼台勾日醉, <br/>  曲廊石径通天阙. <br/>  伴清风,魂入九天云,灵霄越.</strong></font></p>
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<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#ff00ff" size="5"><strong>  拾梯去,成仙切. <br/>  芳洲现,澄湖泻. <br/>  雾笼轻舟小,笛声欢悦. <br/>  波逐阁前荷叶浪, <br/>  风雕泉畔烟花雪. <br/>  不由我,高唱满江红,清音迭. </strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00cc00" size="5"><strong>&shy;</strong></font><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00cc00" size="5"></font></strong> </p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" size="5"><b fromubb="1">  <font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#ff0099"> <font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312">金山亭位于如意洲以东、隔澄湖相对。从月色江声西过小石板桥 ,沿湖滨小道往北,跨叠石小桥可达金山岛。由山石堆砌,三面临湖 ,一面溪涧,峻崖峭壁,造型雄伟,湖水环抱,如紫金浮玉。金山, 本在江苏镇江的江心。山上建有江天寺、妙高峰、法海洞、慈寿寺等名胜。康熙皇帝南巡时,多次登金山游览,醉心于江流天际的壮丽景色,回京后便在山庄水面开阔的澄湖东部修筑了金山岛。</font> </font></b></font>&shy; </p>
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<p align="center">&shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" size="5"><b fromubb="1"><a href="http://www.china.com.cn/ch-pic/hebei/hebeiview/images/684.jpg" target="_blank" appendurl="1"><img style="BACKGROUND: none="none"  transparent="transparent"  scroll="scroll"  repeat="repeat"  0% 0%" height="348" alt="图片" src="http://www.china.com.cn/ch-pic/hebei/hebeiview/images/684.jpg" width="520" border="0" appendurl="1" orgsrc="http://www.china.com.cn/ch-pic/hebei/hebeiview/images/684.jpg" 0%? 0% repeat="repeat" scroll="scroll" transparent="transparent" none?/></a></b></font></p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" size="5"><b fromubb="1"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#3333ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312">  <font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#ff0099">避暑山庄的金山与镇江的金山相比,规模虽小,但景物环境相似。山西麓有石阶与水滨相接,可由此登舟泛湖。历石阶而上是面西的7间敞厅门殿。东上便是面阔5间的镜水云岑殿。殿外有过山曲廊,回环曲折,高低参差,形如半月环抱。再顺叠石蹬道拾级而上,即金山峰顶平台,台上面南建殿3间,名“天宇咸畅”。过此殿可登危楼 高耸的三层上帝阁,阁檐悬有康熙帝御笔匾三面,下曰“皇穹永佑” ,中曰“元武威灵”,上曰“天高听卑”,阁的上两层是皇帝礼奉真武大帝、玉皇大帝的地方。阁下临湖一亭,乾隆皇帝题名“芳洲”。循上帝阁内木梯登阁,如登妙高峰,水天空阔,融为一体。康熙皇帝说此阁:“仰接云霄,俯临碧水,如登妙高峰上。北固烟云,海门风月,皆归一览。”镇江金山慈寿塔是八面七级,山庄上帝阁是六面三级。与金山江天寺景观效果神似。</font></font></font> </b></font>&shy; </p>
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<p align="center">&shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" size="5"><b fromubb="1"><a href="http://www.kaiyuancarpet.com/gongao/upimages/200661510754570.jpg" target="_blank" appendurl="1"><img style="BACKGROUND: none="none"  transparent="transparent"  scroll="scroll"  repeat="repeat"  0% 0%" height="48" alt="图片" src="http://www.kaiyuancarpet.com/gongao/upimages/200661510754570.jpg" width="48" border="0" appendurl="1" fakesize="1" orgsrc="http://www.kaiyuancarpet.com/gongao/upimages/200661510754570.jpg" 0% repeat="repeat" scroll="scroll" transparent="transparent" none? 501px? HEIGHT: 600px; WIDTH: 0%;/></a></b></font></p>
<p align="center">&shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#3333ff" size="5"><b fromubb="1">  <font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#ff0099">镇江金山之西一里有中冷泉,汲泉烹茶,清香甘美,被誉为“天下第一泉”。而山庄金山岛东北半里处有热河泉,水含多种矿物质,是制作承德上等饮料?杏仁露、酸枣露、山楂露、金莲花露、大枣露的主要原料。</font></b></font></p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312"><b fromubb="1"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#cc00cc" size="4">满江红 </font></b></font><a href="http://book.5ilog.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/write_shi54.htm" target="_blank"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">按律填词</b></font></a><wbr> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙仄平平(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙⊙仄(豆)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙平⊙仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙⊙仄(豆)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙平⊙仄(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙平⊙仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙仄⊙平平仄仄(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙平⊙仄平平仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙⊙⊙(豆)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙仄仄平平(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">平平仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙⊙仄(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">平⊙仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">平⊙仄(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">平平仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312"><b fromubb="1"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#cc00cc" size="4">仄⊙平⊙仄(句)</font></b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">仄平平仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙仄⊙平平仄仄(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙平⊙仄平平仄(韵)</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙⊙⊙(豆)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">⊙仄仄平平(句)</b></font> &shy;<font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312"><b fromubb="1"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" color="#cc00cc" size="4">平平仄(韵)</font></b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">宋-岳 飞</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">怒发冲冠,凭阑处、潇潇雨歇。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">抬望眼、仰天长啸,壮怀激烈。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">三十功名尘与土,八千里路云和月。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">莫等闲、白了少年头,空悲切。</b></font> &shy;</p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">靖康耻,犹未雪;臣子恨,何时灭?</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">驾长车踏破,贺兰山缺。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">壮志饥餐胡虏肉,笑谈渴饮匈奴血。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">待从头、收拾旧山河,朝天阙。</b></font></p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">辛弃疾</b></font> &shy;</p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">点火樱桃,照一架、荼縻如雪。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">春正好、见龙孙穿破,紫苔苍壁。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">乳燕引雏飞力弱,流莺唤友娇声怯。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">问春归、不肯带愁归,肠千结。</b></font> &shy;</p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">层楼望,春山叠;家何在?烟波隔。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">把古今遗恨,向他谁说?</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">蝴蝶不传千里梦,子规叫断三更月。</b></font> &shy;</p>
<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">听声声、枕上劝人归,归难得。</b></font> &shy;</p>
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<p><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc00cc" size="4"><b fromubb="1">(1)本调九十三字,十八句,前片四仄韵,后片五仄韵。姜夔改叶平韵,声情俱变,从者甚少,此处不录。(2)第三第四句为四字两句,前加三字豆。五、六两句,宜用对偶。第七句八字,句法上三下五,实即平起平收之七字句上加一豆,所以语气可不停顿。第八句三字,用平平仄,已成定格。后片起四句,均三字仄句,第二、四句叶韵分作两排,各自对偶。为了避免呆滞,可以改为以上二句对下二句。第五、六句均四字,上加一豆。(3)本调从苏轼开始多抒豪放之情,故一向以声情激越称著,岳飞词就是一例。作者写词时年已三十,却把自己已建立的功名看作象尘土一般微不足道。还我河山,直捣八千里外的金邦老巢--黄龙府,才是自己的志愿。站得高,看得远,意境才能开阔。“三十功名”两句不仅内容好,对仗也很工,音节也很响亮。后片“壮志”一联,说我怀着雄心壮志,象饥饿要觅食似地饱餐敌人的肉;我谈笑自如象口渴了要喝水似地痛饮敌人的血。它表现了作者对敌人刻骨仇恨,压倒敌人的英雄气概,没有强烈的爱国主义精神是写不出来的。此外,“白了少年头”的“白”字,“踏破贺兰山缺”的“破”字,都用得十分生动有力,从炼字上也可以得到启发。有人认为此词的忠君思想比较严重。我们认为这首词尽管有忠君思想,但表现了恢复中原的不可动摇的意志,是符合人民利益的,是一首爱国主义的杰作。</b></font> &shy;</p>
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沙发
发表于 2010-12-5 15:57:57 | 只看该作者
波逐阁前荷叶浪, <br/>  风雕泉畔烟花雪. <br/>  不由我,高唱满江红,清音迭.好句!<br/>意境开阔,清新流畅,欣赏问好!
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板凳
发表于 2010-12-4 00:32:08 | 只看该作者
柳永体吧。有几个字的平仄可推敲,还有“灵霄越”的“越”似乎应用平声韵。问好斑斑!
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-12-4 20:35:00 | 只看该作者
<strong><font size=\"5\"><font color=\"#008000\"><font face=\"Verdana\">呵</font><font face=\"Verdana\">呵,<font face=\"Verdana\">我</font><font face=\"Verdana\">重<font face=\"Verdana\">新</font><font face=\"Verdana\">把<font face=\"Verdana\">词</font><font face=\"Verdana\">谱<font face=\"Verdana\">和</font><font face=\"Verdana\">简<font face=\"Verdana\">介</font><font face=\"Verdana\">发<font face=\"Verdana\">上</font>,<font face=\"Verdana\">请</font><font face=\"Verdana\">首<font face=\"Verdana\">席</font><font face=\"Verdana\">赐<font face=\"Verdana\">评</font>....<font face=\"Verdana\">先</font><font face=\"Verdana\">行<font face=\"Verdana\">谢</font><font face=\"Verdana\">过</font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></strong>
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-12-5 20:33:20 | 只看该作者
<font face=\"Verdana\">谢</font><font face=\"Verdana\">过<font face=\"Verdana\">点</font><font face=\"Verdana\">点......<font face=\"Verdana\">问</font><font face=\"Verdana\">好</font></font></font>
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