[原创]洞仙歌 近重阳

淡若花痕

<strong><font size="4"><font color="#cc00ff"><font face="楷体_GB2312">重阳又近，看绿调香浅。<wbr><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><wbr>缕缕新愁落孤馆。<wbr></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font></font></font></font></strong><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="5"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc00ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312"><b><wbr>漫悲吟，雁字霜菊余痕，凭谁</b><wbr><b><wbr>问、一任妆残眉黯。</b><wbr></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="5"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc00ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312"><b><wbr></b><wbr></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="5"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc00ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312"><b><wbr>念沧桑几度，霎那芳华，悄已随烟两消散。</b><wbr></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="5"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc00ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312"><b><wbr>望处起相思，醉向天涯，蓦回首、流年偷换。<br/>纵择尽，怕字句难成，未曾料，词间阙歌零乱。</b></font></font></font>

梅影点点

漫悲吟，雁字霜菊余痕，凭谁<wbr><b><wbr>问、一任妆残眉黯。</b><wbr><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><br/><font style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\" size=\"5\"><font style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\" color=\"#cc00ff\"><font style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\" face=\"楷体_GB2312\" size=\"4\"><b><wbr></b><wbr></font><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"></font><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"></font><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><br/>好句！欣赏香香好词！

淡若花痕

<p>自己回！</p>

一阳居士

此阕好于上阕，音韵流畅，雅赏！