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[原创]【落日孤烟/并州王志文】水调歌头?中秋?和画家王红莉同牌中秋寄语

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发表于 2010-9-22 17:31:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">水调歌头?中秋?和画家王红莉同牌中秋寄语<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体"> </span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 27.55pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">皓月最亲近,岁岁舞苍穹。吴刚捧上桂酒,玉兔暖寒宫。只见嫦娥飞袖,更见人间盛世,浩荡架飞虹。一曲仄平调,两阙颂峥嵘。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 27.55pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">抬望眼,碧空静,远目光。遐思过往,飞绪跌宕跃葱茏。非是起承转合,却是知心错爱,高义自相同。歌罢祝福语,再述感怀风。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体"> </span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">水调歌头?中秋寄语(画家王红莉)<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体"> </span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 27.55pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">明月悬碧空,举目望苍穹。遥见吴刚捧桂酒,嫦娥广寒宫。茅台杜康邀饮,何奈人间不同,薄云飞遮面。花香银辉生,欢歌庆升平。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 27.55pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-line-height-rule: exactly; tab-stops: 45.8pt 91.6pt 137.4pt 183.2pt 229.0pt 274.8pt 320.6pt 366.4pt 412.2pt 458.0pt 503.8pt 549.6pt 595.4pt 641.2pt 687.0pt 732.8pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.96" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体">仰长空,月圆晴,撒银光。千古风流,人生今宵更欢情。如烟往事切切,如痴如醉融融,思念藏心底!华灯映京城,此景入画屏。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
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沙发
发表于 2010-9-23 19:20:12 | 只看该作者
有些字句太直白,稍感空洞了些,个见问好!
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板凳
发表于 2010-9-23 01:03:29 | 只看该作者
中秋快乐!
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地板
发表于 2010-9-25 10:51:53 | 只看该作者
<b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #0070c0; FONT-FAMILY: 方正魏碑简体\">抬望眼,碧空静,远目光。“</span></b>光”字出律,ang和ing\\ong\\eng不在一个韵部。结构有点松散,个见!
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