[原创]金缕曲?中秋思母兼寄兄弟

不忮不求

<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6"><strong>吾母平安否？</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">念遥程、山长水阔，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">几回折柳！</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">记得那年初失怙，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">屋破家贫室漏。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">长与幼、凄然相守。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">粥薄嘴多粮不足，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">忍饥时、泪滴青衫袖。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">闻夜雨，盼星斗。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">云开日暖丛林秀。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">卅年间、光阴过客，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">往来奔走。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">望断佳期千里目，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">赢得形容枯瘦。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">惟祝愿：慈颜依旧！</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">行孝应须趁老健，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">莫迟疑、百善兹为首。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="6">明月下，尽樽酒。</font></strong></p>

一阳居士

显然是新韵，韵脚没有问题，中间有一些发平声韵的入声字（按词林正韵均为仄声）请标上新韵！问好！