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<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#800000" size="4">秋光尤凛霜天晚</font></span>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#800000" size="4">朝云暮雨，高唐梦幻，</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#800000" size="4">聚散如烟。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#800000" size="4">皓月连空重影，</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#800000" size="4">料想应在明年。</font></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia"><font color="#800000" size="4">     2010.9.21.</font></span></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-9-24 19:52:45编辑过]

一阳居士

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<div id=\"textstyle_1\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt; OVERFLOW: hidden; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; WORD-WRAP: break-word\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia\"><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" color=\"#800000\" size=\"4\">秋光尤凛霜天晚</font></span> </div></td></tr></tbody></table>“晚”字处为平声韵脚，查平水韵未发现“晚”可做平声用。如“媛”字平仄通用。问好！请细酌！

半帆

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>一阳居士</i>在2010-9-25 10:42:11的发言：</b><br/>
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<div id=\"textstyle_1\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt; OVERFLOW: hidden; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 0px; WORD-WRAP: break-word\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Georgia; mso-hansi-font-family: Georgia\"><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" color=\"#800000\" size=\"4\">秋光尤凛霜天晚</font></span> </div></td></tr></tbody></table>“晚”字处为平声韵脚，查平水韵未发现“晚”可做平声用。如“媛”字平仄通用。问好！请细酌！ </div>
<p>居士所言极是。谢谢！曾考虑过，想到词韵对平仄要求不是很严，故为之。问好！</p>

一亩书屋主人

<p>拜读！欣赏！</p>