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【无闷】 作别泉城有思

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发表于 2010-7-1 16:27:25 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"></font></span></font></span> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">春思如绵,戚戚又思,当春怎做生活</font><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">?</font></span></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">谩多寄</font><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">、</font><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">鸣泉韵自寥</font></span><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体; FONT-SIZE: 16px">?</font></span></font><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">。</font></span></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">想我奔波到此,飞毂下、换取<font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">菖蒲节。</font></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">息心渐,卜得元亨利贞,凭谁能说?</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 楷体_GB2312" lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"> <wbr></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">纠结。拭半湖柳,觉似洒练,颇奈稀阔。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">甚解底、输他一苞三蘖。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">莫道行藏在我,用舍却总被,暗中裁夺。</font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">最惆怅,</font></span><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Lucida sans="sans"  Unicode'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">掣搦红尘阵里,几无消歇</font><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体">。</font></span></font></p>
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沙发
发表于 2010-7-7 17:28:19 | 只看该作者
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Lucida sans=\" 0pt? mso-font-kerning: Unicode?; sans?><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">掣搦红尘阵里,几无消歇</font><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">。</font></span>---生活啊~~
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板凳
发表于 2010-7-7 18:48:41 | 只看该作者
<p>“<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">息心渐,卜得元亨利贞,凭谁能说?</font></span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">......</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"></span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">莫道行藏在我,用舍却总被,暗中裁夺。</font></span></p>
<p style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" align=\"left\"><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">最惆怅,</font></span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Lucida sans=\" 0pt? mso-font-kerning: Unicode?; sans?><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">掣搦红尘阵里,几无消歇</font><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">。”感悟得好深刻,难得的好词!学习、欣赏。</font></span></font></p>
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地板
发表于 2010-7-1 17:02:27 | 只看该作者
<p>问好烟雨兄,</p>
<p>这个“<span style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt\"><font style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312, 楷体\">纠结”用得恰到好处。</font></span></p>
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5#
发表于 2010-7-1 20:07:09 | 只看该作者
阁下是谁啊!写得太好了!不服不行!服了!!
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发表于 2010-7-1 20:07:50 | 只看该作者
百读不厌!
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7#
发表于 2010-7-3 09:15:35 | 只看该作者
欣赏,好个有思!问好<font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\"><b>掬泡斋</b></font>!
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发表于 2010-7-6 23:12:07 | 只看该作者
整首词 都在愁中纠结,如果意境能有起伏也许更好, 有强说愁之感。 个见!
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