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[原创]虞美人?秋荷

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发表于 2009-9-30 10:02:22 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>碧衣重恼东池雨,薄恨加些许。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>春心犹作意中青,央着东风别弄恁无情。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>芳姿岂自愁多病,笑对秋波镜。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>珠残也未失心丝,一缕柔情但遣玉人知。</strong></font></span> </p>
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沙发
发表于 2009-10-1 00:06:09 | 只看该作者
<p><font size=\"4\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new=\"New\"><font color=\"#000000\">一缕柔情但遣玉人知</font></span></font></p>
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板凳
发表于 2009-10-1 00:06:58 | 只看该作者
<font face=\"宋体\">问好山翁,祝双节快乐!</font>
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地板
发表于 2009-10-1 02:10:01 | 只看该作者
读了几遍,楞是找不到秋荷的影子。请恕我愚钝。如果说,“秋波镜”与“珠残”是作为秋荷的指代,那么这两词在全文中的地位也太弱了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-1 09:45:26 | 只看该作者
呵呵,白丁所说极是,秋荷 残了,词中找不到!
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