五绝?山梅（新韵）

贾连凯

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<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">       雪寒生傲气，点点俏飞红。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b> </p>
<p>                   <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">铁韵抒刚烈，豪情荡远风。</span></b></p>
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又是秋色

还是拘束了。问好。

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">虽然有气势，但韵味尚欠。</font>

贾连凯

谢谢又是秋色好友指点！

贾连凯

谢长风好友珍评、精点！