故乡风情（一）山村

木石散人

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木石散人

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-11-30 16:29:38的发言：</b><br/><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">意象似过密。</font> </div>
<p>谢谢点评。</p>

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">意象似过密。</font>

木石散人

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2010-11-29 16:50:05的发言：</b><br/>结句似可再提高 </div>
<p>谢谢，容酌。</p>

白雪仙子

结句似可再提高

垒石

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-11-30 16:29:38的发言：</b><br/><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">意象似过密。</font> </div>
<p>同感。</p>
<p>成大杂烩了。若承起句加以发挥，一事一议尚好。问好木石散人！</p>