论坛活动交作业：七律?《学诗杂感》

柳浪闻莺

<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-INDENT: 6pt; mso-char-indent-count: .5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? new="New">（原创）七律?《学诗杂感》</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? new="New">邯郸学步少佳篇，立雪程门近一年。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? new="New">梳点涂鸦思地缝，闲翻典范品天泉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? new="New">诗坛潮起千帆过，柳岸舟沉万箭穿。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?; mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? new="New">莫笑临渊徒结网，唯求版主借龙船。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>

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霜凌

<font size=\"5\">呵呵!问候老朋友.地缝不必思哦!若学诗无果都思地缝广阔国土当无平地<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em55.gif\" /></font>

柳浪闻莺

呵呵，谢谢亲，问安！<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em55.gif\" />

四海一棋

地缝与天泉真是工对哈。看起来程门立雪不易。问好流星！

白雪仙子

写得好玩评得有趣 哈

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">精神真可嘉也！请教，“柳岸舟沉万箭穿”是啥意思呢？</font>

诗酒当歌

<p>舟沉万箭穿，过了。</p>
<p>结句稍泛泛。</p>