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五律?马兰头

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发表于 2009-10-28 16:31:40 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><font color="#000000"><font size="4"><strong>最爱江南好,春来绿一丛。<span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US"> </span></strong></font></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><font color="#000000" size="4"><strong>清香堪药食,淡定不图功。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><font color="#000000" size="4"><strong>惯历莺声远,听由杏蕾红。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><font color="#000000" size="4"><strong>无情篱外菊,几朵意相通。</strong></font></span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">马兰头</span> <span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">又名</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" XMLANG="EN-US"><a href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/28040.htm" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial" XMLANG="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">马兰</span></span></a></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">、红梗菜、鸡儿菜、路边菊或田边菊等。属</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" XMLANG="EN-US"><a href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/147362.htm" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial" XMLANG="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">菊科</span></span></a></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">多年生</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" XMLANG="EN-US"><a href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/39012.htm" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial" XMLANG="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">草本植物</span></span></a></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">。春天摘其嫩茎叶作蔬菜称马兰头。秋天开粉紫小花,状如雏菊。中医认为马兰头性味辛凉、微寒,有清热解毒、凉血止血、利湿消肿之功效。主治咽喉肿痛、痛疖疗疮、</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" XML:LANG="EN-US"><a href="http://baike.baidu.com/view/136162.htm" target="_blank"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial" XML:LANG="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US" XML:LANG="EN-US">黄疸</span></span></a></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">、水肿、痢疾、淋浊等症。</span></p>
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沙发
发表于 2009-10-28 18:06:52 | 只看该作者
看来这马兰头是好东西。作品不错,从药用、精神诸方面给与了马兰头恰切的评价。唯“<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体\"><font color=\"#000000\" size=\"4\"><strong>清香堪药食,淡定不图功。”对仗有些宽了。问好白鹭!</strong></font></span>
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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-29 18:11:33 | 只看该作者
问好四海版主,我们已经在博客里互为好友了,是吧,我博客的名字叫若耶溪。本来也没有想弄博客,上次湘弦老师一篇诗歌被一个博客盗窃,我为了发言就注册了一个,谁知道竟然在博客中认识了本地的许多诗友,算一个意外收获吧,当然也认识了你。
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地板
 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-29 18:13:35 | 只看该作者
问好顽石朋友,想不到在这里我们又相遇了。不图功是有点败笔,但一时也没有想出更合适的词。
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