[原创]五律 佳日

安全东

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体">佳日<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">佳日开青眼，芳春足胜游。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">花皴红锦幛，草织翠云裘。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">玉笛当时梦，清风何处楼？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">此身应不倦，野兴总悠悠。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" New? Roman?><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">               </span>2010</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" New? Roman?>3</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New">．</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" New? Roman?>7<o:p></o:p></font></span></p>

[此贴子已经被湘弦绝响于2010-03-16 23:33:52编辑过]

浪中行吟

欣赏，问好！

一行白鹭

<p>清新自然，充满野趣，是安版一贯的风格，欣赏。</p>

锄月花樵

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>一行白鹭</i>在2010-03-15 12:22:00的发言：</b><br/>
<p>清新自然，充满野趣，是安版一贯的风格，欣赏。</p></div>
<p>同感同赏！中二联尤佳，足堪咀嚼，有味。</p>

又是秋色

情趣意趣，清新怡人，学习并问好！！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">锤炼到位又不见斧凿之痕，殊为难得。</font>

安全东

谢各位吟兄雅赏并谢总版飘红鼓励。

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-03-17 10:33:08编辑过]

四海一棋

<p>整体不错，“皴，织”字下得好。颈联含蓄有味，结句稍差。</p>

安全东

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>四海一棋</i>在2010-03-17 11:47:30的发言：</b><br/>
<p>整体不错，“皴，织”字下得好。颈联含蓄有味，结句稍差。</p></div>
<p>谢四海兄玉赏鼓励。</p>