七绝---题石染斋《独钓图》

任雨读

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<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new="new"  roman'; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA" lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">囊中收得天然趣，忘我陶然山水间。</span></p>
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司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">结句稍嫌表浅。</font>

一行白鹭

好象在哪读过？

锄月花樵

首句溶裁前人句太类，二、三句甚佳，结正如司马所论。