[原创]七律?次韵玉?生《锦瑟》

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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6"><strong>日午庭中听管弦，</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">清风扶柳似当年。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">扬州几处闻黄鹤？</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">蜀道曾经哭杜鹃。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">白屋堂前堪养鸟，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">青峰岭上半笼烟。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">篷门远在千山外，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">怅望云天叹杳然。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">附：《锦瑟》</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">锦瑟无端五十弦，一弦一柱思华年。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">庄生晓梦迷蝴蝶，望帝春心托杜鹃。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">沧海月明珠有泪，蓝田日暖玉生烟。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#00ff00" size="6">此情可待成追忆，只是当时已惘然。</font></strong></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-6-1 9:08:41编辑过]

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谢谢朋友提点！现已改过。