[原创]七律?莲

危桥踏雪

<p><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><font color="#333333"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font> </p>
<p><font face="宋体"><font size="3"><font color="#333333"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">何处天姬落水浔，临波微步</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">百花钦。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">   香凝玉蕊由人妒，天赐清</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">风伴我吟。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">   西子湖中垂涕泪，</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">濂溪月下梦知音。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">   沉浮多少悲欢事，千古风流</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">说到今。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><br/></p></font></font></font>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-6-13 16:08:07编辑过]

锄月花樵

似以红楼梦中黛玉咏菊诗移化而来。

一行白鹭

对仗工稳，诗思清晰，欣赏。

老翅江湖

沉浮多少悲欢事，千古<wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><font style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\">风流说到今。</font><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><wbr style=\"LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em\"><img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em63.gif\" />

司马长风

<p><font face=\"宋体\" color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“水浔”乃水边，“金风”即秋风，莲乃夏花。</font></p>
<p><font face=\"宋体\" color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“西子湖中垂涕泪”不知是何传说，请赐教。</font></p>
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危桥踏雪

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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-6-11 11:19:31编辑过]

危桥踏雪

<font color=\"#333333\" size=\"4\">莲花的花期:6月－9月  </font>
<p><font color=\"#333333\"><font size=\"4\"><font face=\"宋体\">   “西子湖中垂涕泪”.莲，又称荷,</font>相传是王母娘娘身边的一个美貌侍女??玉姬的化身。当初玉姬看见人间双双对对，男耕女织，十分羡慕，因此动了凡心，在河神女儿的陪伴下逃出天宫，来到杭州的西子湖畔。西湖秀丽的风光使玉姬流连忘返，忘情的在湖中嬉戏，到天亮也舍不得离开。王母娘娘知道后用莲花宝座将玉姬打入湖中，并将她“打入淤泥，永世不得再登南天”。</font></font></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-6-11 11:26:04编辑过]

又是秋色

附议司马首版。金风确感不稳。