[原创]玉楼春

白衣书生

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #c0c0c0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">雨苑--俺巴孩汗(493899910) 17:48:12 <br/>以〈玉楼春〉为词牌，以〈香闺〉为题，填词。如何？ <br/>雪君子(11814297) 17:58:28 <br/>燕、扇、见、乱、面、片</span><wbr> <br/></font><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #c0c0c0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">雪君子(11814297) 17:58:35 <br/>这六个韵脚</span><wbr> <br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">白衣书生(451628619) 18:03:18</span><wbr><br/></font></span><wbr><br/><font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #c0c0c0"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">玉楼春</span><wbr> <br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">凭栏怎对归来燕 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">玉手轻摇香坠扇 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">拾阶碎步上瑶台 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">怅卧云罗难一见 </span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">兰笺溅墨相思乱 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">梦醒懒梳憔悴面 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">才将寂寞画屏风 </span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">又是愁云成万片</span></font><wbr>

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