[原创]山坡羊三首

暗香疏影

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">【山坡羊】<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">清姿泠秀，珠帘风透。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">春无影迹飞红瘦，雨空收，曲难柔。<br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">小廊花落香盈袖，书尽雅词成百首。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">情，萦月楼，音，君记否？<br/></p><span lang="EN-US"><o:p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">【山坡羊】<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">清风依旧，斜阳空瘦，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">痴心却怕流光透，迹犹休，梦无休。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">许些南国相思豆，拨尽云弦情久守。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">人，何落愁，思，何忘愁。<br/></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">【山坡羊】<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">词：暗香疏影<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">凌波轻骤，人心难透。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">东篱谢尽颦眉皱，落桥头，道深秋。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" widow-orphan? mso-pagination: exactly; mso-line-height-rule: center; TEXT-ALIGN: 24pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">倚栏空立罗裳瘦，尽酿悲风吟苦酒。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">笺，随梦流，痕，随梦流。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-9-8 22:34:42编辑过]

暗香疏影

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>女神</i>在2010-9-8 15:30:44的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>欣赏<font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\">暗香疏影</font>朋友一组山坡羊好曲！欢迎经常来曲苑赐佳作！问好！</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong></strong></font></font> </p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong></strong></font></font> </p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>【中吕.山坡羊】小令兼用。又名[苏武持节]。亦入[黄钟]、[商调]。与南曲小异。<br/>平平平去△，平平平去△，×平×仄平平△去。<br/>仄平平△，仄平平△，×平×仄平平去△，×仄×平平厶上△（平）。<br/>平▲，×去平△（上）；平▲，×去平△（上）。</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>全曲共十一句，七字句宜律句，第一，二句和第四，五句宜对。</strong></font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>本曲平仄要求比较严格，第一，二，三，六句必叶去声韵。第七，九，十一句韵前一字必用去声。</strong></font></p>
<p><strong><font size=\"4\"><font face=\"Verdana\">末尾四句是全曲的点睛之句。</font><font face=\"Verdana\">第七句的尾三字和第九,十一这两句要是[平去上],都得是[平去上],要是[平去平],就都得是[平去平],这才有[山坡羊]的味道!</font></font></strong><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>平去平，最好。上去平，第二着。平去上，第三着， 还有一种格式：上去上，是第四着。这里撇开去声和单字句不谈，实际上就是尾三句的韵脚问题。按照王力的理论理想的韵脚是：上平平。而元人中吕山坡羊这约50%的韵脚是：平平平，或上上上。据此我们得出的 结论是 ：上平平。是一种理想的形式；而平平平，上上上。是一种通常或流兴的形式 。      </strong></font></p>
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<p><font face=\"Verdana\" size=\"4\"><strong>所以此曲有几处当酌。  首先【山坡羊】的曲牌前面应该加上【中吕.】宫调。其次应该根据内容加个题目。第三， 百，独，苦三字处应是去声字。如果要求不太严格“百和苦”易可。但“独”字出。第三首两个“水”字处当用去声。女神个见，仅供参考。<br/></p></strong></font></div>
<p>呵呵，谢谢女神，下次一定严格按照曲牌填，这次只是依韵画瓢而已！</p>

女神

<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>欣赏<font color=\"#61b713\" face=\"Verdana\">暗香疏影</font>朋友一组山坡羊好曲！欢迎经常来曲苑赐佳作！问好！</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong></strong></font></font> </p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong></strong></font></font> </p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\"><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>【中吕.山坡羊】小令兼用。又名[苏武持节]。亦入[黄钟]、[商调]。与南曲小异。<br/>平平平去△，平平平去△，×平×仄平平△去。<br/>仄平平△，仄平平△，×平×仄平平去△，×仄×平平厶上△（平）。<br/>平▲，×去平△（上）；平▲，×去平△（上）。</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>全曲共十一句，七字句宜律句，第一，二句和第四，五句宜对。</strong></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>本曲平仄要求比较严格，第一，二，三，六句必叶去声韵。第七，九，十一句韵前一字必用去声。</strong></font></p>
<p><strong><font size=\"4\"><font face=\"Verdana\">末尾四句是全曲的点睛之句。</font><font face=\"Verdana\">第七句的尾三字和第九,十一这两句要是[平去上],都得是[平去上],要是[平去平],就都得是[平去平],这才有[山坡羊]的味道!</font></font></strong><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>平去平，最好。上去平，第二着。平去上，第三着， 还有一种格式：上去上，是第四着。这里撇开去声和单字句不谈，实际上就是尾三句的韵脚问题。按照王力的理论理想的韵脚是：上平平。而元人中吕山坡羊这约50%的韵脚是：平平平，或上上上。据此我们得出的 结论是 ：上平平。是一种理想的形式；而平平平，上上上。是一种通常或流兴的形式 。      </strong></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong></strong></font> </p>
<p><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong></strong></font> </p>
<p><font size=\"4\" face=\"Verdana\"><strong>所以此曲有几处当酌。  首先【山坡羊】的曲牌前面应该加上【中吕.】宫调。其次应该根据内容加个题目。第三， 百，独，苦三字处应是去声字。如果要求不太严格“百和苦”易可。但“独”字出。第三首两个“水”字处当用去声。女神个见，仅供参考。<br/></p></strong></font>

兔喜雨

迟赏为憾！用同一韵部连作三首山坡羊不易！附议女神意见！曲谱中对去声有规定时，应当从之。欢迎朋友常来赐曲！祝朋友中秋愉快！