[原创]咏秋（新韵）

东川

  
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">最是秋光好，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">东篱色正红，<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">夕阳明远路，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">山寺响沉钟。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">千里婵娟缓，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">一行大雁匆，<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">登高遥望处，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312">凛凛傲霜松。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>

又是秋色

<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312\">山寺响沉钟</span>，句不错，但用此嫌入味晚，与秋无干。缓字感凑。