[原创]青玉案?读《潼关怀古》有寄

不忮不求

<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5"><strong>兴亡自古苍生苦。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">更不怨、风和雨。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">白发萧疏愁自语：</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">灰飞烟灭、</font></strong><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">可怜樯橹，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">谁换人间主？</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5"></font></strong> </p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">黄尘陌上飘蓬舞，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">醉里乡关在何处？</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">一阕离歌斜日暮。</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">枫桥残月、瓜洲古渡，</font></strong></p>
<p align="center"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="5">芳草年年路。</font></strong></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-10-8 7:40:54编辑过]

梅影点点

笔法苍古，学习欣赏！

东方泽华

<strong><font size=\"5\" face=\"楷体_GB2312\">一阕离歌斜日暮。</font></strong>不错的青玉案，稍显直白。问好！

书剑江湖

<p>欣赏，</p>
<p>惜两结稍旧了些。</p>