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<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#000000" size="4"><strong>绝句三个</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 宋体? mso-fareast-font-family: AR-SA; 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>与诸友泛舟象湖</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 宋体? mso-fareast-font-family: AR-SA; 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">云天漠漠柳婆娑，觅得佳朋泛碧波。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">几处沉鱼秋梦破，纷纷出水看青娥。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>桂花</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 宋体? mso-fareast-font-family: AR-SA; 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">金黄银白灿如云，未至跟前人已熏。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">待到枝头芳蕊老，清香只向菊花闻。</font></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff"><strong>
<p align="center"><font size="4">步桃盆栽九日登高韵</font></strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 宋体? mso-fareast-font-family: AR-SA; 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">置身枉自向通衢，二十馀年只索居。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">岂是丘平陟无处，此心原不识茱萸。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong></strong></font></span> </p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#000000" size="4"><strong>次向闲迎仰斋过访韵时余亦叨陪末座</strong></font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 宋体? mso-fareast-font-family: AR-SA; 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-size:><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">袁州人瑞驭风来，忆昔闻名耳贯雷。</font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">结社几年欣有主，聆言数度愧无才。</font></span></font></span></font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">得亲耆宿精神爽，共说诗坛话匣开。</font></span></font></span></font></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4">一盏清茶陪左右，杯盘未奉亦舒怀。</font></span></font></span></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=";" mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font color="#0000ff" size="4"></p></font></span></font></span>

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<p><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\">绝句其一“<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new=\"New\" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family: mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt? ;?>几处沉鱼秋梦破”此句不佳；其二无味，蛇头蛇尾；其三佳。</span></font></font></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new=\"New\" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family: mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt? ;?><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">七律首联“忆昔闻名耳贯雷”不过“久闻大名、如雷贯耳”之化，见俗，无新意，且赘。中二联工稳，尾联势弱，诗结意亦结。</font></span></p>

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