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姜子丹

  
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">采桑子 <span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">应从别后伤心晚，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">月也新愁。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">花也新愁，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">花不知言月不留。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">叠红赘粉春如海，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">爱下芳洲。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">怯下芳洲，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">人到相思步步秋。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

梅影点点

好词欣赏，叠语相用，更衬托出情绪的波澜！

隔水伊人

<p>叠红赘粉春如海，</p>
<p>爱下芳洲。</p>
<p>怯下芳洲，</p>
<p>人到相思步步秋。</p>
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<p>下片好,?情致!</p>

一阳居士

<p>花不知言月不留。</p>此句拗口，还望调整，个见！

姜子丹

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