[原创]七律辘轳体?杯中日月韵添情（新声韵）

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<font color="#dc143c" size="6"><strong>                            <font size="4"> <font face="Verdana">七律辘轳体?杯中日月韵添情（新声韵）</font></font></strong>
<p align="center"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 32px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体"><u>琴</u></font></span></span></p>
<p align="center"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 32px"></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font size="4"><font face="宋体"><font color="#000080"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #ff9900">杯中日月韵添情，</span><wbr>小筑曲廊透婉声。</font></font></font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">白雪盈盈希入耳，阳春阵阵共云聆。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">丝竹欲奏高山志，玉管还吹流水风。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">把酒豪歌随律注，知音万古永留名。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font size="4"><font face="宋体"><font color="#000080"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><font color="#000080">方寸争锋拟战枰</font>，</span><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #ff9900">杯中日月韵添情。</span><wbr></font></font></font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">黑白玉粒相博弈，敌我友朋共续盟。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">悠然世外青峰里，松壑竹涛铸我形。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">毫枝淡墨意深凝，笔走龙蛇挥剑英。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font size="4"><font face="宋体"><font color="#000080"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><font color="#000080">壶里乾坤禅道满，</font></span><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #ff9900">杯中日月韵添情。</span><wbr></font></font></font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">虬书傲骨兰亭序，劲草豪诗赤壁铭。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">水墨丝绢骏马腾，竹虾浅草戏云屏。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">活灵活现神魂具，栩栩如生风骨擎。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">丹青巧技临真迹，逸致陶心畅意盈。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">琴棋书画酒诗茗，雅士华章赋话灵。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">滚滚长河东逝去，泱泱史海记群英。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; COLOR: #33cc00; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font color="#000080" size="4" face="宋体">微言欲述难着墨，重彩还云少词评。</font></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="TEXT-DECORATION: underline"><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-SIZE: 24px"><font size="4"><font face="宋体"><font color="#000080"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #33cc00"><font color="#000080">几度停斛敲键录，</font></span><wbr><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; COLOR: #ff9900">杯中日月韵添情。</span></font></font></font></span></span></span></span></div></font>

[此贴子已经被司马长风于2010-11-25 16:45:02编辑过]

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">     此辘轳体也。《水浒传》中快活林酒店前一联云：“醉里乾坤大，壶中日月长”，此辘轳旋转句“杯中日月韵添情”如以之咏酒，或更恰当。观此五首，其衔接似较勉强。<br/>     整体尚佳，琴棋二首稍胜。个处尚可再酌。如：</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“丝竹欲奏高山志，玉管还吹流水风”此虽言两物，实则合掌，且管乐非琴，显凑。<br/>“白雪盈盈希入耳，阳春阵阵共云聆”、“尺素江山描志趣，杯中日月韵添情”、“微言欲述难着墨，重彩还云少词评”对稍不工。<br/>“笔走龙蛇挥剑英”，“英”凑韵。此外个别用词亦须再酌。</font></p>
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溪塘过雪

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