[原创]少年游

冷月斜窗

<p align="center"><font color="#008000" size="5">少年游</font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal" align="center"><font size="5"><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">凄风暮雨晚归楼，极目更难收。临江柳舞</span><font face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">，天涯音远，一叶叹长流。</span><span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal" align="center"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font color="#008000" size="5">经年诗笔终费去，何事落羁留？明月前期，梦魂桥谢，岂有旧时柔。</font></span></p>

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冷月斜窗

呵呵，你看也费力啊，那是词味不浓了。吾回家继续修行。来更婉约一点。