野外

顽石

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<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">雪原寥廓日西斜，淡笼清香野酒家。</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">喜鹊闲依骚客样，身披道氅戏梅花。</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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青山依旧

<p style=\"MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt\" class=\"p0\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: \'宋体\'; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; mso-spacerun: \'yes\'\">喜鹊闲傍无赖客，身披道氅戏梅花。</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: \'宋体\'; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold; mso-spacerun: \'yes\'\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>很有野趣~

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">确有野趣。<br/>“喜鹊闲傍无赖客”，“傍”有两读，义不同。读平时通“旁”，读仄时方为“依傍”之意。此应读仄。<br/></font>

又是秋色

身披道氅戏梅花。结佳！

如琴可听

“身披道氅戏梅花”确有一番情趣！愿在新的一年里看到朋友更多好的作品！

顽石

<p>谢谢青山版主、司马首版、秋版助、如琴版主关注与鼓励！谢谢司马首版指教！</p>
<p>第三句修改了下，还请各位版主继续指教！</p>