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[原创]忆桃源慢*危楼独倚

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发表于 2011-1-6 15:55:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">香枕犹寒,玉容盈泪,几迹新痕浅。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">魂游神怅,锦帐?帘羞卷。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">渐阔春衫,浑不觉,斜了凤?慵绾。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">杏苞犹瘦,初芽弱柳,春寒料峭无觉暖。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">枝头处,燕莺软语,早把梦乡扰乱。</span></b><b><span style="COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break"/></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">自知人去天涯,欲寻行、坎途弥远。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">蝇头端楷,凭寄锦鸾鸿雁。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">黯感伤,青鸾缈遇,玉门空怀泪眼。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">危阑堪倚,重楼层嶂,清幽几许深南苑。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">又初更,朔镰锋冷,钩落凄凉一片。</span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: #336666; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"></span></b><span><font size="3"><font color="#333333">注:《忆桃源慢》纳兰性德自度曲,见纳兰性德《饮水词》。一百二十八字,上、下片各六十四字五仄韵。<span style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: #333333; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></font></font><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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沙发
发表于 2011-1-7 11:04:22 | 只看该作者
情怀感伤,凄清之作,音韵流畅,雅赏!
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板凳
发表于 2011-1-7 13:55:27 | 只看该作者
<p>情怀缱绻,意境凄寒。</p>
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<p>品赏佳作,问候楼主!</p>
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