咏梅（步李益喜见外弟韵）

泮水

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ??"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ??; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px" size="3"><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial">花开花又落，雨雪几遭逢。</span></font></font></span></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ??"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 9.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: ??; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px" size="3"><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial"></span></font><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial">旖旎春风态，晶莹秋月容。</span></font></p>
<p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial">冰姿盘铁干，霜韵绕铜钟。</span></font></p>
<p style="WORD-BREAK: break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial"></span></font><font color="#9900ff"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial">香气排芳阵，携来锦万重。</span></font></p></font></span></span>

[此贴子已经被司马长风于2011-1-13 0:29:06编辑过]

又是秋色

这是去年春天中华赛题之作吧，欣赏问好。

明月诗心

<p style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" align=\"left\"><font color=\"#9900ff\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt\"></span></font><font color=\"#9900ff\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 13.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt\">香气排芳阵，携来锦万重。</span></font></p>
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<p>步韵不易。</p>

泮水

谢首版指教。祝好！

非子若云

<p>欣赏！</p>

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">有些刻意，故于韵味有伤。</font></p>
<p><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\"></font></font> </p>
<p><font size=\"3\"><font color=\"#0000ff\">附：<strong>李益《喜见外弟又言别》</strong></font></font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">十年离乱后，长大一相逢。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">问姓惊初见，称名忆旧容。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">别来沧海事，语罢暮天钟。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">明日巴陵道，秋山又几重。</font></p>