虞美人?悠思

非子若云

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文若水

欣赏凄婉小令！

非子若云

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>文若水</i>在2011-1-24 6:20:03的发言：</b><br/>欣赏凄婉小令！ </div>
<p>谢谢文版垂赏！问好！</p>

一阳居士

婉约流畅，欣赏佳作，问候诗友！

萧萧易水寒

寒冬未描春意，何以带雨？下片转入春季为宜，个见！

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-24 17:10:23编辑过]

隔水伊人

不算喜欢！