七律?永远怀念人民的好总理

非子若云

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<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?>             无私碎骨千秋地，为仆掏心百姓家。</span></b></p>
<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?>             绝代忠良昭青史，做官后辈脚休斜。</span></b></p></span></b>

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-2-15 22:00:04编辑过]

水之心

绝代忠良昭青史，做官后辈脚休斜。

非子若云

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>煮雨亭主</i>在2011-1-30 11:33:22的发言：</b><br/>永远怀念人民的好总理! </div>
<p>谢谢<strong><em>煮雨亭主垂赏！问好！</em></strong></p>

泰安山人

一首好律 劲赏！

诗酒当歌

<p>同怀念！</p>
<p>中二联三四字均为动宾结构，读来稍板，似可调整一下，这样读来音节更有韵致。</p>
<p>无私骨碎千秋地，为仆心掏百姓家。</p>
<p>妄议了。</p>

煮雨亭主

永远怀念人民的好总理!

明月诗心

绝代忠良昭青史，做官后辈脚休斜。高山仰止！