[原创]水畔【七绝】

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<p class="works-content" _fckxhtmljob="1"><font size="5" face="仿宋_GB2312" _fckxhtmljob="1"><strong _fckxhtmljob="1">清风云影两相和，<br _fckxhtmljob="1"/></strong></font></p>
<p class="works-content" _fckxhtmljob="1"><font size="5" face="仿宋_GB2312" _fckxhtmljob="1"><strong _fckxhtmljob="1">雨细烟浓笼笠蓑。<br _fckxhtmljob="1"/></strong></font></p>
<p class="works-content" _fckxhtmljob="1"><font size="5" face="仿宋_GB2312" _fckxhtmljob="1"><strong _fckxhtmljob="1">棹静帆闲惟向海，<br _fckxhtmljob="1"/></strong></font></p>
<p class="works-content" _fckxhtmljob="1"><font size="5" face="仿宋_GB2312" _fckxhtmljob="1"><strong _fckxhtmljob="1">自同萍水远婆娑。</strong></font></p>

又是秋色

转结之意，个尚感不明。问好。

如琴可听

既然是“棹静帆闲”，如何又“惟向海”呢？不如用“愁”字替代“惟”字，也好与“自同萍水远婆娑”相吻合。（拙见）问好勿言君。愿看到朋友更多好的作品！

【凤梧】勿言

我非写愁，又何来愁字？

【凤梧】勿言

呵呵，问好