琵琶仙--依韵汉唐的风题魏新河《垂虹感旧图》

萧萧易水寒

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<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">人又登楼，叹栏旧、底事如墙斑驳。</span><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">　</span></strong><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal" lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></strong></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">桥左鹅柳黄莺，当年忆相约。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">斜映水、依然朔月，更勾起别殇堪觉。</span><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">　</span></strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">几缕幽弦，三杯腊酒，犹自斟酌。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">小窗闭，罗帕怜诗，恐人笑、多情鬓霜角。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">寻觅雁儿无迹，锦书凭谁托？</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">风乍起、残红怅怅，点点愁紫苑深锁。</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">自是浓酒琵琶，独尝闺寞。</span></font></p>
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<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"> </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">注：钦定词谱词林正韵（姜夔格）<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">琵琶仙<span lang="EN-US">-</span>《</span></strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt">钦定词谱》卷二十八　双调一百字，前段九句四仄韵，后段八句四仄韵。</span></font></p>
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<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">附：汉唐的风原玉：</font></span></font></p>
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<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">【琵琶仙】<br/>??借晦窗??《垂虹感??》<br/>     <br/>??江南，藉毫管、越尾??重?。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">???上?波，?年共漂泊。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">羁旅念、垂虹塔影，算?有、黛眉愁削。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">月柳婆娑，琴箫落寞，??斟酌？ </font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3"> 渺茫?、?鹭??，想仙?、逍?更?昨。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">?是五湖?秀，易滋生梅萼。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">??景、亭?倦倚，?晚?、?笛?掠。</font></span></font></p>
<p><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font size="3">但恐人笑多情，鬓?霜角。<br/></font>　<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p></font>

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双玉并赏，皆是好词，学习问好！

啸天

问好易水寒，&quot;更勾起别殇堪觉。&quot;　更勾起，与堪觉，意思差不多，有些重复了。。
“当年忆相约。”矛盾。。。
“自是浓酒琵琶，独尝闺寞。”“浓酒与闺寞”可再酌酌，再说上阕已提到独斟酒了。。。
个人感觉，直言莫怪。。。