[原创]离亭燕/长阳清江即景

诗酒斋

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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>绿染清江如画，</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>春风春雨潇洒。</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>水映青山山裹雾，</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>两岸柳丝飘挂。</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>客饮借扁舟，</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>系缆桃花湾下。*</strong></font></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>云际彩桥飞架，*</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>岩上隔河高坝。*</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>古寨土楼鸣凤塔，*</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>点缀美城华厦。</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>细品稻花香，*</strong></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>好听渔樵闲话。</strong></font></p>
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<p><strong><font color="#00ff00" size="2" face="楷体_GB2312">*桃花湾，一个农家小酒店，与县城隔江相望。游客欲往就餐，须乘店家的小舟过去。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#00ff00" size="2" face="楷体_GB2312">*彩桥，指长阳清江大桥。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#00ff00" size="2" face="楷体_GB2312">*高坝，指位于清江长阳段的隔河岩水电站大坝。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#00ff00" size="2" face="楷体_GB2312">*鸣凤塔，在长阳县城背后的山上。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font color="#00ff00" size="2" face="楷体_GB2312">*稻花香，是宜昌地区最有名的美酒。</font></strong></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体; FONT-SIZE: 18px" color="#00ff00"><strong>（2009.3.3于长阳"清江花园酒店")</strong></font></p>

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