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<span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">  </span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">几回把酒黯伤魂，<span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">独对暮天醉意沉。</span></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">西风烟柳水光碧，</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">落日天涯草色深。 </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">  离人泪，游子心 ，</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr> <span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">梦里山河依旧春。 </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">扶栏南望故园路， </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">满眼苍茫万里云！</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>

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落雁公主

<p><font face=\"Verdana\">⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄平平仄（句）<br/>⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）</font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\">平仄仄（句）<br/>仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄平平仄（句）<br/>⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）</font></p> 请问朋友的这股填词谱是哪个？问好楼主。。