（原创）七绝?《贫父》

柳浪闻莺

<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " times="" mso-hansi-font-family:="Times" new="">（原创）七绝?《贫父》</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: " times="" mso-hansi-font-family:="Times" new="">老朽雕虫堪幼稚，文章练达枉忧民。</span></p>
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柳浪闻莺

谢谢湘弦总版点评，我再琢磨改一下。我也是觉的承的不是很顺，似乎扯的远了点......湘弦总版的一百多首七律，我已经收藏起来，正在慢慢研究品读。