七绝.轱辘体..吊忆爱国诗人屈原

商树华

离骚伴水共流长，千载英名浩气扬。
江上招魂渔父曲，一腔热血化悲凉。

壮志难酬恨乱纲，离骚伴水共流长。
丹青写尽忠贞语，天问豪书绝世章。

汨罗讧水葬忠良，不悔一生殉国郎。
赤子胸怀当敬仰，离骚伴水共流长。

注：（借用闲心若水版主句）离骚伴水共流长

逸兴居士

诗情并茂，立意悠长。

逸兴居士

第三首第一句"沈泊罗水葬衷肠"失律也不好懂，宜改为"汨罗讧水葬忠良"

逸兴居士

赏读轱辘体组诗，问好树华吟友！

商树华

逸兴居士:第三首第一句"沈泊罗水葬衷肠"失律也不好懂，宜改为"汨罗讧水葬忠良" (2014-05-30 21:13)

深谢老师历见！我已修改。向老师敬茶！

逸兴居士

树华不必客气，诗友之间互相切磋，应该的，问好！

闲心若水

笔力苍劲，行文有法，怀古浓郁，蕴意深厚，遥祝端午节快乐~~

柳下雪

赞赏佳作！祝端午节幸福快乐！

闲心若水

清晨赏读佳构，感受诗人一份情怀，遥祝端午节愉快

阿金

一组佳作。激赏。
问候朋友。

阿金

逸兴版评的到位。。。。。。。附议飘红。
问候朋友。

绿叶条条

http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14884463.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14884537.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14885691.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14885837.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14887923.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14887461.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14887061.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14886675.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14886525.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14886067.html

http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14935381.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14935503.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14935627.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14935709.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14935809.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14936191.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14937419.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14937525.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14937891.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14938057.html

http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14968119.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14968023.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967909.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967855.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967795.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967717.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967651.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14967301.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967165.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14967037.html

http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14990621.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14989609.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14989549.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14989481.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/14989361.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14989247.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14986939.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14986739.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14986583.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/14986409.html

http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15094449.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15094533.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15094751.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/15094941.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15095093.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15095279.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15098977.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/15099021.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15101485.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/15101521.html

http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15125259.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15125219.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124871.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124783.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124745.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124689.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124603.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124513.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124423.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15124165.html

http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15166337.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15161887.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15161493.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160965.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160775.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160603.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160467.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160243.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15160077.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15159819.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15150047.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15149913.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15149831.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/15149561.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15149377.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15149275.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15149137.html
http://www.aibang.com/article/16 ... oduct/15149041.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15147347.html
http://www.aibang.com/show/16717 ... oduct/15147049.html

http://yiyuan.120ask.com/6467
http://user.qzone.qq.com/1637993192
http://weibo.com/zzxjbdf
http://user.qzone.qq.com/2587033005
http://yiyuan.120ask.com/info/6467.html
http://user.qzone.qq.com/631168757
http://user.qzone.qq.com/1922331239
http://baike.soso.com/v48327956.htm
http://user.qzone.qq.com/2843506822
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/3069470905
http://3291634.ic98.com/
http://user.qzone.qq.com/758331752