（原创）七律?题【秦淮夜色图】（平水韵?六麻）

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<div><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy" xmllang="EN-US"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>（原创）七律?题【秦淮夜色图】（平水韵?六麻）</span> </span>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 133pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>文</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy" xmllang="EN-US">/</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>闻英</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>钱塘水暖月初华，渔火江风入万家。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>金陵几度观朝雾，铁锁何曾见暮鸦。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>暂且兰舟听故事，兴亡岂得怨琵琶。</span></p></div>

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紫嫣郡主

楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em23.gif\" />问好闻莺！<br/>

苇雨一笑

<p style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>暂且兰舟听故事，兴亡岂得怨琵琶。</span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>警句。建议精华。</span></p>

白雪仙子

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柳浪闻莺

<p>谢谢苇雨一笑老师点评，问好！周末快乐！</p>

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<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。喜欢这句，欣赏好律，支持推精。。。<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em63.gif\" /></span>

柳浪闻莺

谢谢白雪仙子版主鼓励，问好亲，周末快乐！

司马长风

<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">中二联工稳可赏，“渔火江风入万家”、“暂且兰舟”似应再酌。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">先飘红。<br/></font></p>

柳浪闻莺

谢谢老翅江湖，司马长风老师点评鼓励，问好！周末快乐！

柳浪闻莺

谢谢紫鄢亲，问候郡主好！周末快乐！

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