[原创]荷雨

淮水渔翁

  
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">荷雨</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">夏云翻滚炸雷鸣，无际荷塘天水倾。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">风骤红荷怜爱意，雨浇青叶乱芭筝。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">采莲盆躲村前女，摆渡船摇邻后生。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">湖岸钓翁无去处，笠蓑板鼓唱渔情。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p></font></span>

月影轩主

<p>芭筝？</p>
<p>还是琶筝？</p>
<p>诗颇传神。</p>
<p>尾联好。</p>
<p> </p>

诗酒当歌

中二联的属对稍欠圆润。

白雪仙子

雨浇青叶乱芭筝----好句！

淮水渔翁

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>月影轩主</i>在2010-8-3 23:19:03的发言：</b><br/>
<p>芭筝？</p>
<p>还是。诗颇传神。</p>
<p>尾联好。</p>
<p> </p></div>
<p> </p>
<p>谢谢。</p>

西楼孤灯

诗很有韵味，惜荷字重复乃诗家小忌也。问好！

淮水渔翁

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>西楼孤灯</i>在2010-8-4 8:31:42的发言：</b><br/>诗很有韵味，惜荷字重复乃诗家小忌也。问好！ </div>
<p>谢谢老师，渔翁疏忽了。</p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">荷雨</span><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 9pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">夏云翻滚炸雷鸣，无际青塘天水倾。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"></span> </p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">风骤红荷怜爱意，雨浇绿叶乱琶筝。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"></span> </p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">采莲盆躲村前女，摆渡船摇邻后生。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\"></span> </p>
<p class=\"MsoNormal\" style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto\" align=\"center\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">湖岸钓翁无去处，笠蓑板鼓唱渔情。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-8-4 10:34:45编辑过]