[原创]蝶恋花.无情了

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<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#de8143" size="3"><strong>莫道无情人亦老，</strong></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#de8143" size="3"><strong>痴梦难消，</strong></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#de8143" size="3"><strong>终是多情扰。<br/>原本虚无空寂寥，</strong></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#de8143" size="3"><strong>荒唐一世残生了。</strong></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#de8143" size="3"><strong><br/>最好当如春色好，</strong></font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#e48545">可惜花红，</font></strong></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#e48545">却被秋风扫。<br/>应笑春情无处讨，</font></strong></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="left" 253.7pt? tab-stops: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#e48545">因缘幻梦天知晓？</font></strong></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-11-20 21:03:04编辑过]

汉唐的风

<p><font size=\"3\">“痴情难消”??“情”字处当仄，出了；“胭红”??有些欠妥，春色非只有红色。。。下片好于上片，可再酌，拟飘红！</font></p>

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感谢汉唐风先生赐教，闲客收下，并祝安好！