七律 悼战友

叶秋

  
<p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; TEXT-INDENT: 126.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-line-height-alt: 16.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">军务多年立将台，一生襟抱几成开？<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; TEXT-INDENT: 126.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-line-height-alt: 16.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">邺城笑貌荧屏出，滨海英姿影集来。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; TEXT-INDENT: 126.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-line-height-alt: 16.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">武备行营人领阵，文思挥笔墨留才。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="BACKGROUND: white; TEXT-INDENT: 126.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-line-height-alt: 16.5pt; mso-char-indent-count: 7.0" align="left"><b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">而今隔界空相忆，心向琴弦绝处哀。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-12-15 15:01:17编辑过]

叶秋

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-12-13 23:29:22的发言：</b><br/><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">悲悼之情溢于言表。<br/>“邺城笑貌荧屏出，滨海英姿影集来”最喜此联。末句暗用钟俞之典，甚佳。“抒”古音为仄。<br/></font></div>
<p>多谢师友指点，将“抒”改作“留”可否？</p>

叶秋

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>明月诗心</i>在2010-12-14 17:23:04的发言：</b><br/>首联设问，结句回应，甚好！ </div>
<p>多谢评点，问好！</p>

浪中行吟

一生襟抱几成开？<span lang=\"EN-US\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span>此句借的也不错，欣赏！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">悲悼之情溢于言表。<br/>“邺城笑貌荧屏出，滨海英姿影集来”最喜此联。末句暗用钟俞之典，甚佳。“抒”古音为仄。<br/></font>

明月诗心

首联设问，结句回应，甚好！

文若水

问好欣赏！