七言律诗 乘飞机偶感

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<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; COLOR: #464646; FONT-SIZE: 18pt">乘飞机偶感<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana"></span></b> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana"></span></b> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">奔腾雾海波涛静，万仞云岚脚下行。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">尘世纷繁泯瞬去，人间欲恶倏忽空。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">长飞假翅千程远，短省扪心几度生。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana">倘若精诚游一趟，焉能抱憾付东风。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">                </span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"></span></span></b> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana" lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">                    </span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt">庚寅仲冬<span style="COLOR: #464646" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-9 23:45:29编辑过]

贾连凯

诚谢好友关怀！

贾连凯

谢谢点评！

贾连凯

是新韵！谢谢关怀！

贾连凯

是用的新韵。谢首席版主关心！

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">应为新声韵，否则出律出韵。<br/>个别字眼尚需再酌。既是“乘飞机”，结却言“倘若神魂游一趟”，若非神不守舍么？一笑<br/></font>

贾连凯

长风精点！“神魂”改为“精诚”何如？

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-9 23:46:03编辑过]

又是秋色

<p><font size=\"3\">结见心性。</font></p>

青山依旧

是否新韵，平水好象不是这韵脚。

非子若云

<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\">尘世纷繁泯瞬去，人间欲恶倏忽空。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>