七绝?牡丹醉春

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[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-10 10:20:53编辑过]

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谢司马首版精点！“白”改“艳”，“荡”改“诉”，咋样？

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-10 10:20:12编辑过]

司马长风

<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">转结颇佳。不言人醉而曰鸟醉，借喻得法。<br/>前二句“白粉”、“荡”皆可再酌。<br/></font>

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