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[原创] 步『红楼梦』菊花诗十二律

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发表于 2009-12-15 15:00:32 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="5"><strong><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">忆  </span><wbr>菊 </strong>  </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr></font></div>
<p align="center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">梦回篱圃染相思,又是蜂寒蝶瘦时。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">月态风神犹可记,归魂离怨复谁知?</span><wbr></font></p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">秋容杳杳银灯暗,怀想绵绵玉漏迟。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">我念黄花花念我,霜辰践约两心期。</span></font></div>
<p align="center"><font size="5"><strong>访  菊</strong>   </font></p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">为探芳讯踏霜游,履迹每于篱角留。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">几处新葩晴欲发,谁家老圃冷经秋?</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">芒鞋露重行犹适,布袂寒侵兴自悠。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">仙种从来非易觅,灵根原在楚江头。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"><font size="5"><strong>种  菊</strong></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>    </font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">本自南山移植来,新培宜傍竹阴栽。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">数朝玉露根先发,一度金风萼待开。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">疏蕾浮香凝翠袖,扶枝带影映琼杯。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">会当莳向古盆赏,未许清芳染点埃。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><strong>  对  菊</strong> <wbr>     <br/><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">一圃秋光抵万金,依依守望自情深。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">柴桑消息勤询问,恬淡襟期互唱吟。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">态瘦神清逢雅客,霜前月下托知音。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">且呼绿酒助佳兴,良会无多倍惜阴。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"><font size="5"><strong>供  </span><wbr></span><wbr>菊 </strong>  </font></span></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">催诗佐酒足堪俦,斜插铜瓶满室幽。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">一掬水成三径露,半床书对十分秋。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">分香已得篱边趣,掇秀何劳野外游。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">我亦与之同寂寂,愿花长好韵长留。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr><font size="5"><strong> 咏  菊</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>  </strong> </font>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">诗思撩人晓更侵,风梳露滴挟清音。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">银霜照眼徐徐觅,香雾沾唇细细吟。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">窄韵频敲歌晚节,片辞再检赋秋心。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">屈原餐与渊明采,佳句留传冠古今。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><strong> 画  </span><wbr>菊</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>  </strong> <br/><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">丹青信可引清狂,聚叶攒花细忖量。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">正色惟黄金作墨,图经尚白笔含霜。</span><wbr></font></div></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">傍篱写照迎风秀,对月传神带露香。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">秋色摄来悬壁上,朝朝高会似重阳。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr><font size="5"> <strong>问  </span><wbr>菊</strong></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>   <br/></font>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">秋性超然渺不知,欲询素抱访东篱。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">寒英持节为谁守,瘦蕾吐香缘底迟?</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">高隐幽栖何傲世,屈醒陶醉怎猜思?</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">名花解语却无语,可是齿唇难启时?</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr><font size="5"><strong> 簪  </span><wbr>菊</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>   </strong></font>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">登高亦自插花忙,岂效时髦学异妆<span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times'">?   </span></span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">雅淡宜人应不俗,清香过市总非狂。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">风茎佩罢掩尘垢,月朵插来遮鬓霜。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">行客焉知高士态<span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Times'">?  </span><wbr>任凭指笑野亭旁。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr><font size="5"><strong>菊  </span><wbr></span><wbr>影</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>  </strong> </font>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">堆金积翠叠重重,摇曳偷潜画障中。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">灯火隔窗窥浅淡,秋光入户映玲珑。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">疏烟散去神犹在,冷月移来觉未空。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">轻步休惊一帘梦,霜痕风迹辨朦胧。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"></span><font size="5">  <strong>  菊  </span><wbr>梦   </strong> </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr> </font></div></div></div></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">一觉幽幽入夜清,卧游彭泽认分明。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">和云拟振仙人氅,伴月浑同隐士盟。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">睡里金精穷幻化,醒来玉韵引鸡鸣。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">流连枕上寒宵尽,犹自魂牵不了情。</span></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em"></span><wbr><font size="5">   <strong> 残  </span><wbr>菊</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>  </strong>    </font>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">霜欺雪压数枝欹,寒色还持晚节时。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">摇月影斜怜悴损,卷?人瘦惜离披。</span><wbr></font></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><font size="5"><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">诗情酒兴阑珊甚,淡艳冷香零落迟。</span><span style="COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em">三径未荒犹可待,相期明岁诉幽思。</span><wbr></font></div></div>
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沙发
发表于 2009-12-16 22:09:07 | 只看该作者
<p>洋洋十二首,字字是心血。欣赏一组好律。</p>
<p>亦有新意,只是太多,审美疲劳.</p>
<p>似乎一读能抓住人的警句略少,多少让人有点遗憾~</p>
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板凳
发表于 2009-12-15 18:58:29 | 只看该作者
<p><span style=\"COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em\">我亦与之同寂寂,愿花长好韵长留。</span></p>
<p>月版主高情,菊花一定感应到了.</p>
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地板
发表于 2009-12-16 21:56:51 | 只看该作者
<span style=\"COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em\"><font size=\"4\"><font color=\"#000000\">洋洋十二,写来不易。如“几处新葩晴欲发,谁家老圃冷经秋”、“<span style=\"COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em\">一掬水成三径露,半床书对十分秋”、“<span style=\"COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em\">我亦与之同寂寂,愿花长好韵长留”、“<span style=\"COLOR: #000000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em\">灯火隔窗窥浅淡,秋光入户映玲珑”之句,亦足可观。然个别意境,尚有因循。描梅咏菊,吾素不敢为之。盖无新意,无巧思,欲不落窠臼,难矣哉!</span></span></span></font></font></span>
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