学写五律三首

燕赵悲歌

<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.92pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt" class="p0"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font size="3">腥风吹汉口,微雨入秦关。四野人难寐,三江月竟闲。</span></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.92pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt" class="p0"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font size="3">壮心终逝水,民意早强奸。信是京城好,清宫独戴天。</span></font></p>
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<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.92pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt" class="p0"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font size="3">千年一梦长,四海继秋霜。此地新权贵,谁家旧汉唐。</span></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.92pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt" class="p0"><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font size="3">清平分日月,浊世乱阴阳。走马关山外,啸嗷西北狼。</span></font></p>
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<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 31.92pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt" class="p0"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-WEIGHT: normal; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><font size="3">夸口红楼月,何曾记旧文。凭江听怨笛,隔海望流云。</font></span></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-01-31 21:26:02编辑过]

紫嫣郡主

<p>欣赏，问好朋友！用的新韵，笛是顾意的吗？</p>
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燕赵悲歌

<p>谢顽石先生赏读.</p>

燕赵悲歌

回郡主,我用的是平水啊,怎么会是新韵?真真写的失败,惭愧啊.

紫嫣郡主

<p>是吗，是我看错了，第一首用的是新韵吧。 </p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-02-01 23:58:31编辑过]

燕赵悲歌

<p>回郡主,是不是因为末句的天?</p>
<p>我很多时候喜欢在绝句中用孤雁入群或出群,结果在写律的时候也会这样。</p>