七律?莲叹

一叶孤舟

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墨林醉霜

<p>起承转合工整</p>
<p>格律严谨</p>
<p>以景明志，耐人寻味，意境深远</p>
<p>佳作也</p>
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<p><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" color=\"#ff0000\" size=\"5\"><strong>何与菊黄争魅韵，堪萦月冷守魂娇。</strong></font></p>
<p><strong><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" color=\"#ff0000\" size=\"5\"></font></strong> </p>
<p><strong><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" color=\"#ff0000\" size=\"5\">借景生情，以物明志，升华主题，妙句经典！</font></strong></p>

云中月

<font size=\"6\">写得真好，凄凉悲怜的情意，感人至深。学习了。</font>

天下纵横

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