【金盏子】 5?12汶川大地震双年祭

掬泡斋

  
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">风不鸣条，但切情萍迹，解人心绪。<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">合沓济汶川，羌笛转，沦涟造怀如故。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">  </span></span></span><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt">（汶：【正?】??切，音珉。?岷通。汶江也。）<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">行曦杳杳烟沉，更略商杜宇。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">洄?又、下念一时停辍，泪波谁驻？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
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<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">悲苦。醮还诉。灰蝶起，摄形元栩栩！<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">殷勤尚自为勉，思相偶，相思且凭按堵。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt"><font face="楷体_GB2312">莫教契阔颓慌，要今生无虑。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%" class="MsoNormal"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Lucida Sans="Sans"  Unicode'">轻?渐、披拭</span><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 12pt">??红深，翻歌一部。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
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浪中行吟

悲情可见，但为词觉稍生涩了些。。。问好吟兄！

隔水伊人

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>湘弦绝响</i>在2010-5-16 11:40:19的发言：</b><br/><strong><font face=\"楷体_GB2312\" size=\"4\">汶字上平十二文、去声十三问平仄两读，意通。</font></strong> </div>
<p>以前一直用诗韵新编，我也似懂非懂，搞不太清词韵呢，总是混淆。</p>

锄月花樵

大凡写此类题材，多见失之以议，楼主此作，贵在能以意象出之，殊不乏味，可赏，然遣词略涩，有碍气脉。

逸羽游尘

拜读！