[原创]【水龙吟】*秋绪

溪塘过雪

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<p align="center"><font face="宋体"><font color="#0033ff" size="4">文/溪塘过雪</font></font></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">轻寒又起轩窗，余温消尽浮霜浅。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">苍梧倦柳，丹枫瘦菊，鸿声渐远。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">陌上溪头，点鸦栖树，草疏风翦，</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">又别离时候，柔肠暗逐，无绪处、吟羌管。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">清梦何曾稍减，</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">但唏嘘、嘉年流转。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">青笺旧约，佳期咸误，琴心易感。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">往事难开，新眉重锁，幽思难断。</font></strong></p>
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<p align="center"><strong><font color="#663366" size="4" face="楷体_GB2312">更三杯两盏，孤箫一曲，夜阑深院。</font></strong></p></font>

梅影点点

喜下片，上片略感直叙太多，直言了勿怪！

一阳居士

上片写景，下片抒情，雅赏！

溪塘过雪

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>梅影点点</i>在2010-11-22 7:51:08的发言：</b><br/>喜下片，上片略感直叙太多，直言了勿怪！ </div>
<p>老师所言有理！多谢品评！过雪定当努力！奉茶！</p>