七律【秋吟】（一东）

柳浪闻莺

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>七律【秋吟】（一东）</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>放眼堪惊造化功，秋光毕竟总殊同。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>独凭征雁千帆远，一任闲云万壑空。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>鸟倦霜林怀旧绿，荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>逢君莫问家乡事，或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-12-15 21:14:24编辑过]

明月诗心

<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" new? roman?; ?Times roman?? mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"new\">鸟倦霜林怀旧绿，荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" new? roman?; ?Times roman?? mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"new\">逢君莫问家乡事，或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>
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<p>秋活了！</p>

又是秋色

或恐蝉心不禁风。结好！莫问，个觉可酌。

柳浪闻莺

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>明月诗心</i>在2010-12-15 17:58:29的发言：</b><br/>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"new\" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman?? ???>鸟倦霜林怀旧绿，荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"new\" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman?? ???>逢君莫问家乡事，或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>
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<p>秋活了！</p></div>
<p> 谢谢明月版主点评，问好！</p>

柳浪闻莺

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>又是秋色</i>在2010-12-15 18:35:32的发言：</b><br/>或恐蝉心不禁风。结好！莫问，个觉可酌。 </div>
<p> 谢谢又是秋色老师点评，我再斟酌一下。</p>