五律?醉月

秋叶红也

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<div align="center"><font size="5"><font face="楷体_gb2312 "><span style="COLOR: #333333">搔首仰苍穹</span></font><font face="楷体_gb2312 "><span style="COLOR: #333333">，幽怀谁与同。</span></font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font face="楷体_gb2312 " size="5"><span style="COLOR: #333333">问君何处去，答我上崆峒。</span></font></div>
<div align="center"><font face="楷体_gb2312 " size="5"><span style="COLOR: #333333">不问从前事，休言阡陌风。</span></font></div>
<div align="center"><font size="5"><font face="楷体_gb2312 "><span style="COLOR: #333333">痴心<span id="rlt_1" style="CURSOR: pointer; BORDER-BOTTOM: #fa891b 1px="1px"  solid" >明月</span>净</span></font><font face="楷体_gb2312 "><span style="COLOR: #333333">，天下一诗雄。</span></font></font></div></div></div>

如琴可听

“问君何处去，答我上崆峒”当为流水对。颈联的“问”、“言”是否义同？将“言”改“闻”如何？（个见）问好朋友！