七言律诗 新雪 (新韵)

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[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-18 8:16:40编辑过]

贾连凯

诚谢青山版主指点，“清”冷已改为“寒”冷。敬请多多关心！

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-18 8:16:03编辑过]

如琴可听

寒风、寒冷 重复！

青山依旧

两个清字，不知能否换掉一个。

贾连凯

谢如琴好友指点，“寒风”改为“凌风”何如？